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The silhouette in the back seat seems to say,
what's a few more miles per hour?
Jesus, there ain't any cops around at two AM.
The needle on that glowing green dial shivers, taunting.

After forty days of temptation in the desert,
I turned his breath bitter and blue from nicotine.

The illuminated cone of open road chokes the windshield
And he cranks the gas, feeling his back press against the seat.
A rush of lines and blue-grey pavement.

His fists were scarred, probably thought even Behemoth
was wary of his mirrored sunglasses.

And he thinks: bitch, you're gone,
You're all gone.
Bet you didn't say your prayers right.
He grips the cracked leather steering wheel
Cranks up the radio,
His feet brush crumpled cans
Of beer and Diet Coke
And he feels them holy.

I made him proud of that stain on the wall;
Made his fists bruised from scrubbing and scrubbing.

He stops when it gets light,
Wheels kicking up dust under the dead tree,
Bone-white, like fingers in the sun.
The dust scratches his lungs through the open window.
It glistens in the air, a black cloud

Like an oncoming storm, or the Fifth Plague.

He gets out, straightens his shirt,
Pops the trunk.
And walks away across the deep black earth,
A shovel in hand.
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This is the first piece of poetry I've done since Sewanee, and I don't know how it turned out. It's creepier than a lot of the poems that I like to write. It's called Matthew because I wanted to heavily allude to the book of the bible in which Jesus is tempted in the desert. I wanted to re-imagine it in a modern setting, happening instead to some guy named Matthew.
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The past meets the open road in Matthew by ~Bkkprgirl. ( Featured by `nycterent )
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
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~golden-eidolon Jun 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely brilliant.
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~golden-eidolon Jun 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure! :)
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:iconirvon:
Awesome. Very masculine, too, you don't see that around here very often.
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*SilverWynd Jan 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE IT! The concept if aswsome!
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:iconbkkprgirl:
Thank you, Silverwynd! :)
(and thanks for the fav!)
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